P1+M1 -cross media campaigns

M3 + D1 -feedback and client considerations

key: bold black=client_blue=my response_black=my improved response_purple=how useful the feedback is_green=what i plan on doing with the feedback IMPROVED

M1 -SWOT analysis

M2 -potential client questions

IMPROVED

P1 -generating ideas

P4 -final pitch

pitch evaluation: overall, I feel that this pitch was alot more sucessful than my previous pitch. my presentation along with how well i sold my idea greatly improved. I was not just reading off a powerpoint and was more enthusiastic when it came to explaning the various points of my pitch. i ensured that my client had a clear understanding of my show idea and answered any questions they had regarding my pitch. I included all neccessary aspects and explained then affectively. I also ensured that my power point was not too wordy and made improvements from the feedback i aquired after my previous pitch. If i was to do this pitch again, I would include some photos that link to each episode of my idea. This would give my client a clearer idea of what each episode includes.

P3

pitch reflection - overall, my pitch went ok. I could've done with supporting notes but I was still able to get the main points across. I recieved some great feedback that I was able to act on, improving my pitch. One of the main realisations I had when doing my practice pitch was that my powerpoint was way too wordy. I was just reading off a powerpoint instead of actually pitching my idea. My powerpoint had alot of unnecessary content that had to be remeoved. I also came to the realisation that some of the slides of my powerpoint were not in the most effective order. For example, the budget slide shoukd have been after the episode breakdowns. This gave more context to the budget and made my decisions more understandable.

P2

D1

M3&4

P5 -editing diary

1st version 2nd version FINAL

P4 -filming diary and logging rushes

IMPROVED

M2 -ethical and legal issues